All Comments on 'In Phoebe’s Cottage'

by greenmountaineer

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annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 15 years ago
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fiddleheads! your word weave, dreamy, want to join, ice in glasses

JamesCiriacoJamesCiriacoalmost 15 years ago
Well done!

I really like this. It's gently suggestive, but it makes those suggestions natural, almost wholesome; there's a hint of the sacred in Phoebe's life that she herself disarms of any pretentiousness.

TzaraTzaraalmost 15 years ago
Non-erotic?

I agree. <i>Gently</i> suggestive, which is appropriate to the subject. I liked it and have to say that I also never know when to say something is "erotic" vs. "non-erotic."<P>

Elegant and quite nice.

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