All Comments on 'Waiting for Paradise'

not sure what to think. it sure was different. the writing was ok. it could have used more style. the word choice did leave a touch to be desired but, overall, not bad.

I guess the "every sibling" being a mate for 3 generations is the part that makes it impossible to really believe as that sort of thing would have, by gen 3 resulted in some fairly intense birth defects.

I thought the story was good and I look forward to the next installment.

Thanks, this is really hot! Hope to read the sequel very soon.

really hottt beginning...definetly tell us more...especially more detail about dad/dean bi action..as women/moms like myself...and bi couples like us...nothing a bigger turn-on than hot sex charged dad/son bi action when mom/bi stud dad/share all with their hot jock stud son...this scenerio is almost 99% of time omitted from posts on this site...so it is really terrific that you like us..and many others find this topic/scenerio soooooo hotttttttt! ! ! in family fun stories...

Hope u continue with the story.

Loved it! Hope part 2 is soon to come : )

Very good start, can't wait to find out what happens.

MAKE MORE CHAPTERS I WANT MORE

I'm just one of many voices d=crying out for more from this talented writer. Trish, you should never stop at this one good story. More, please.

Loved this beginning! I hope you have spent the last few months working on the next chapter.While I am not a writer or editor, I give it "2 cocks up!" Please continue.

This story was very well written. Okay, so there are a few things that are hard to beleive......but it is erotic and does the trick (if you know what I mean). So, thank you - and hope to see more someday!!

Please continue in the middle of jacking off

please...my cunt is so wet...

I take it this will be a forever cliffhanger. Bummer. It was a good start.

Oh Trish, How could you possibly leave us hanging like that after such a wonderful story...

Had to stop reading when the dad said the son could fuck him. Stop with this gay shit you homo.

Please continue this story.... I like this story very very much .... i read this for several times.... i never read this kind of story... please please continue or do similar kind of stories.. with incest babies...

Sibling marraige....

A sister find that her Big brother is actually her biological father too.

A Niece find that her Uncle is actually her Biological father too.

A Son find that his Father is also his Big brother,

A son fucks his Mother and his Sister-daughter.

Almost a hot story until you realize all of the inbreeding…..

Wow. I got off reading this. Thanks for the fantasy and the great cum.

Please post the next part earlu i m eager to read the story

our family is very open and we enjoy each other every Saturday the whole family fucks together, any other day we pick who ever .

What a tease...