All Comments on 'Rainy Picnic'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Twister

I thought this was going to be a hot lesbian story and then you changed it up...very nicely done...but not something that interests me. Well done though. Keep writing. This surely calls for a next chapter. I know others will enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
So real

Most males are as interested in one and other as all real women are!

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