All Comments on 'Girlfriend and Kristen Bell'

Sorry, but this story was a complete waste of time and space.

@last commenter. That's just rude. Sure it could have been a bit longer and more descriptive, and given some reason. And I always prefer noncon.

However, the writing is decent so that's 25, it has Kristen Bell and that's another 25, and you mention Veronica which is another 25. I liked it a lot, and as the first fic around here to mention VM, good job.

I am interested in writing as a couple, but you have to be careful that it does not lead to an inconsistent writing voice. Writing something like "Best. Orgasm. Ever." or "Best. [Anything]. Ever." sounds like something a girl or a very effeminate man would say.