All Comments on 'Grey'

Nice read. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

A good beginning. Looking forward to more

Can't wait for the next one. Very intrigued. There were some occasional typos but it didnt detract from your story which was a pleasure to read.

very interesting start...u definitely have my attention. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

great great start :) please continue

...and anxious for the next part. Good start!

You've got my interest. Good writing. Cruel cliffhanger. Hope to see more.

So I'm thinking you're a total tease because so many people have requested that you continue your story on the coloured from CT ( and most coloureds hate/envy the CT coloureds becuse they have the shocking eyes and most of us, like me, a point-five, get the brown) and you are obviously not doing so...

So yes, curious scribe, you have fans, of which I am sure maximlly 1 in 5 wrote you. Plz continue

when are you going to continue? Don't be a cruel tease and give us the next insallment please.