All Comments on 'Office Fun'

Keep going. very nice

You have written enough.

Just getting really hot

The author is a slug

All she needs is evidence he is committing criminal blackmail and sexual harrassment. But then one would have to wonder then how she was so eager to participate. After all women like her have no real feelings for anyone or anything except themselves. One would expect her to drag her daughter in as bait for men.

CAN ONLY HOPE THE HUSBAND CATCHES THEM

I can only grade a story that is a finished one, here.....

A finished version of this story would have you fucking her without birth control so you would be knocking her up and making a situation where her husband is going to be supporting your baby, whether or not he is capable of fathering another child with her.

Thanks for sharing this very well written story...looking forward to the telling of the "rest of the story".

Thanks again,

Manfred aka "boaman007@yahoo.com

Come on! Taking too long to write? How lame. The story has a good premise that falls flat with the final paragraph.

Lame last paragraph, otherwise, very hot

You have a good start and like most have said ... it is not that long; in fact, perhaps a little short. However, you have the basis for a good if not a great story ... let's see where your 'dirty old man' mind can take this.

OH, you have me hooked, I want to read the rest of the story. How will the little slut perform for her new master? Will she be a good little cum slut, and obey her master? Thanks for the good chapter............Rich

Not to mention both characters and her online lover.

Maybe she should be made to please others without getting her own finish, and display of her charms by provocative attire and punished by loosing buttons, clips to hold garments together and lack of under garments.

Anyway, nice writing.

Good story, aren't many men who would not take full advantage of a situation as in the story, if you continue tell us how you fuck the sluts ass.