All Comments on 'My Beautiful Breasts'

Your DDD breasts ruined it. This is the usual mistake noobs make. Always with the DDDDDDDD breasts and 17" cocks.

I like this story . I hope there is more . And I like big breasts. Who wants to read about a flat chested woman and a small dicked man.More Please !!!

Horrid!

Some realistic elements. Good descriptions so keep writing you have potential if you keep it real.

This may be a fantasy to you, but rather ugly mind pictures appear in the minds of people who really know. Also, writing in slang, etc., is off-putting for most readers. Kinda hard to write it, too, if you keep it up.

"Show me your tits and I'll give you some popeye's chicken."

Are you kidding me with this shit?

Sounded too stereotypical black gangster type. Had horrible editing, the wording was enough to turn most anyone off.

I liked that Daddy bribed her with the chicken---made it seem nastier.

I just wish that Daddy had gotten himself some pussy and fucked that thing really good.

Could you be a more stereotypical? Why not add in watermelon with the chicken? Your usage of slang comes across very ham- fisted and insulting.

first the DDD tits wounded it no such thing as DDD tits then it was way to ethnic that drove the last nail in the coffin it's like you are trying to drive the readers away don't give up your day job

Don't disrespect your own race. You shouldn't describe yourself with tits bigger than watermelons, use shitty slang, or make your self-insert like to eat fried chicken.

A black racist. Sheesh, you fucking noob.