All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter with Aunt Sue'

by WimborneMale1978

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Too Short !

Sex scene was far too rushed, and there was little foreplay. Needed to be padded out a bit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Local flavour

Great to read a story that is local to me, I hope that you are going to continue writing like this, even add to this one and maybe make the stories longer. This is a story that has realism unlike many others and does not have the numerous mistakes that makes others a pain to read. Keep it up.

Ilovebbw466Ilovebbw466over 11 years ago
Ok

I would love to make love to her more without a condom

spankfunforspankfunforabout 8 years ago
Knowing When to Take Charge!

Aunt Sue Got Things Going and Then It Was His Time! Great Story!

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 2 years ago

A fantasy fulfilled, it does need more, maybe Katie too. A proof reader would help raise it to a 5

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