All Comments on 'The Briefcase Ch. 01'

by MissSenses

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
Tense, well-written...

....and no sex yet!

Just a few annoying editing errors: 'heightered his height advantage' for example.

But I'm hanging in there for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wanting more

You know how to keep a reader wanting more.

Very erotic undercurrent.

Lord_ConsortLord_Consortover 13 years ago

Great...got me hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
SEXY

LOVE IT SO FAR

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