All Comments on 'Venturing Onto the Other Side'

by Rekh

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Let's see more of Theo and Sam!

I would love to see a sequel or a series. Something more in depth with a plot and finish to the story(as long as it has a happy ending!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good but

i would lose the German stuff. it detracts from the story. it's not needed. i mean, the character can be of German descent without sounding that way, but if you decide to keep it, please make it more consistent. either he says yeah or he says ja.

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