All Comments on 'Ayasha's Beast'

This is a very good start. i would like to see more.

It's a good start. Keep it up. :)

this coould be really good can't wait for more

NNNOOOO!!!! Cliffhangers kill me!!! *shiver* post more please!!

Dyami is an asshole and I hope that the father see's him for what he really is and I hope both get their own dose of medicine. Ayasha is not bad at all..just a dreamer...Ne hooo!!! GOOD JOB ON THE STORY AND I HOPE TO SEE CHAPTER 2 SOON.

You have something really good here! Please, keep going! I can't wait to see how this unfolds.

Im so loving this so far!

I want to read about the beast!

is he coming up soon?

pleaseee say yes im dying for you to post again!

dont leave us hanging!

This reminds me of the serial movies of the 1950's, come up to an exciting scene then break off with tune in next week for the further adventures of " ".

I hate that Dyami... smug bastard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice start