All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 09'

fab writing!! keep up the good work!

Nice sequence of events. Now I await the rescue!

NOOOO! Not Jameson!!!! Give him liberty or give him death!! I know dramatic but it fit the situation. Next chapter please.

I'm so loving this story. The characters are all so rich and complex. Can't wait for the next chapter.

They've got to get in there... but we don't want all the Brethren to be trapped with no powers. What's going to happen next?? I'm at the edge of my seat! Please update quickly!

Good action in this chapter! I was so scared that one of the Brethren didn't make it out of the fight. But then things were okay when Liam got hit with the soup, and oh did I laugh. Now to get Jameson! Even though I really don't want him to be tortured, I like that this is different from the usual save the damsel in distress story. Can't wait to see what happens. Thanks for writing!

Very nicely written and suspenseful too.

Good job!

Just had to comment on Liam getting pelted. Got me a few funny stares as I laughed out loud!! :D

poor char, she is going through heck, but i know they will come out the winners in the end.