All Comments on 'My New Sis Ch. 03'

Hard from the start and stays that way****

Owes another great chapter that you wrote about Joey and Shelley. I like how you introduced him to Taylor as they another potential partner. I like how the two parents started seducing each others' child. It hardly wait for the next chapter to see how you develop the characters.

Very erotic but the transition from one sex partner to another could be better.

Loved your closing shower scene!

I think I will have to look up some more superlatives if this gets much better.

This...damn just holy crap, just so hot...

Why the fuck do you writers have to always do this?? It was going so well, why bring the dad into the mix?

mom, dad, the cheerleaders...

so poetmaster as well as other writers should write to only one audience and not express freedom of speech and thought?.. interesting haha

like the series though and your other shit too though poetmaster

I love this series! The shower scene at the end reminded me of after karate practices. Grrrr