All Comments on 'Composition'

I really like the line "two sleepy apostrophes drained of ink" in fact I like the whole poem and it's metaphors

'Two sleepy apostrophe's drained of ink' is such a lovely metaphor I feel it should be used at the end of the poem, as the rest of the poem, while very good, does pale somewhat in comparison. Of course, I can see it doesn't fit at the end- sorry for the useless advice. A better title perhaps- Love Letters, Punctuation Partners, something that combines people and writing (So Write). But still a great poem and lovely read with some beautiful imagery. :-D