All Comments on 'I Think I Can'

Sometimes it is pleasant to sit back and read a nice, well written romance. This one put a big smile on my face.

The writing is fine, and the characters are interesting. The problem is the story. Yes, it is predictable, but then every story is... or maybe there is something new under the sun.

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You've got a nice start with the Little train that could, and the ending is cute. However, you need to change things around a bit to make it more interesting. The stock evil boyfriend? That doesn't make her look very good, or like someone a good healthy man would want. Any woman who "takes a lickin and keeps on stickin" has serious problems and should be avoided.

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Since I've just written my first story, I don't want to sound like an expert, but I do know that the people who edited my story helped move it from being purt cliche to at least having some original parts. Perhaps a good editor would help you as well.

OK the story is great but what's the matter with "I thought I could" Things It implied something bad like she thought she could but she couldn't like she's dying or something I need more info because the endind suggest two things like she was right or she thought she could but find out she couldn't

i liked it i really did, but it was too short. how about adding details on her recovery, about how each of them falling in love, maybe some detail about him propossing and even maybe getting pregnant. just think that would have made the story a little more fun. but i did enjoy it

do help with real live circumstanses. TK U MLJ LV NV

That ending is so mysterious. Like I feel like it’s supposed to imply that she made it through Her hardships and is now happy but initially I got the idea that something was wrong with her?? like another comment said that they thought she could be dying? Idk maybe she coulda said something like “I thought I could, and I could”