All Comments on 'Patriotburger, Extra Cheese'

by pushkine

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bflagsstbflagsstalmost 15 years ago
best pair ever

So edge my lawn and calm my heart

With bound'ries built of body parts.

bluebellbluebellalmost 15 years ago
Agree with Bflagsst

Those lines are dynamite and the whole poem is quite interesting. Certainly warrants repeat readings. I'm glad you shared. This was also mentioned in today's recommendation thread in the poetry forum if you want to come by.

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 15 years ago
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:clapping: just here to say I came I read I loved it. Just bloody awful in all the right ways.

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