by Anitole
Your story is very good so far. It is set out so well. I like your style of writing. I will enjoy reading more of your story. good luck with writing the next part of the story. i do hope its as good as the last.
There is much more to be written and mayhaps someone will pick up your story and expand it.
Please tell me you are going to continue this story. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter :D Well done by the way.
its allways the interesting stories that are abandoned :(
if you're still around, please continue with this story ....
I assure you this story has not been abandoned. I'm just working towards getting several of my books and short stories published and in the mix I'm trying to get another degree while volunteering and driving kids around. Its so compelling, my life.
Is this the end? Nothing to add to the ending since 2009? This is not a good way to publish this story. Finish it for crying out loud!