All Comments on 'Ayasha's Beast Ch. 04'

more please.

I love this! Please write more!!!!! :)

If anyone has something bad to say...just give me their addy and i'll beat them up :)

I would like it if it was a bit longer but i'm not complaining...I still love it.

Looking forward to more :)

okay this the THE LAST chapter which will be short!

everyone happy?

i sure am

sorry for being a sucky author and writing like nothing

i hope they were good anyway.

SOOOO onto the longer submissions hey :)

well enjoy the chapter, and the beast ;)

more on his history and stuff in the rest of the story!

PLEASE VOTEEE!!!!!!!!!

love missanastasia!

xxx

....JUST CONTINUE ON!!! YOUR STORIES ARE GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AS THE DAYS PROGRESS AND THESE DAMN CLIFFHANGERS AIN'T WORKING!!!...lol...Keep up the good work

I am looking forward to the next chapter......like the whole story.

Keep going -- if you're enjoying it, others will too. I'd say the only "bad" thing here is that there's little background. Where did any of these people come from? Where are they? Why are they where they are? It sounds like some of this will be resolved in the next chapter or two, but we need to know more about Ayasha, and the beast, if we are going to empathize and want to know more about them.

As long as you post often. I would prefer short daily posts to long ones that only come once a month.

this is really good thanks for sharing..hope to read more soon

I would agree that it would be nice to have a bit more history but love the story line. I think that this has been an excellent dabble in short stories for you Miss Anastasia. Keep up the great work. I am checking faithfully for new installments. I hope you continue your adventure in short stories. As for those who didn't like the story, each person has their own preference and I like what I've read so far. I wait patiently to find out what will happen next.

I love, love, love this story so far! I can't wait for longer submissions. Pleeeeeease write more!

Only a little disappointed by the lack of...Seems like the girl is running from one rapist to another. Looking for more elaboration on what this beast is. I'm no expert myself but your writing is good.

I love the storyline and the characters so far! But the chapters are much too short...awesome cliffhanger! I'm dying to know what happens next

This is shaping up as a good story... I like the cliffhanger but now I'm dying to know what happens next! WE WANT MORE!!

OH YES THIS IS TURNING OUT TO BE ABSOLUTELY SATISFIYING! I AM PLEASED WITH HOW THE STORY IS GOING SO FAR THAT I REQUEST U FOLLOW UP ON IT VERY SOON...

OMG! Im so inlove with the wolf! XD he is like my favorite character! if he dies I will seriuosly cry! this story has got to be one of the best stories I have read on here! where the hell is my Wolf man? lol keep up the good work!

That wasn't nice where is the rest of it?

YOU ARE DOING A WONDERFUL JOB. PLEASE PLEASE FOLLOW UP. I JUST HOPE THE BEAST DON'T DIE.

good story but im havin trouble visualizing weather the beast is a man or just changing from man to wolf or like half man and beast at the same time

you should finish, I assure you.

Please write more I love it

oh please more..... please please please.......... pretty please.........

Yes more stories

Good story,it does need at least one more chapter,not one for cliff hangers here,but what you have so far is good.

plase please please write more!! getting so good!< love story

i loved ur story so far! please write more

you have done a great thing so far please continue soon

Keep writing, longer, more, more more!!!!!!

wow that was amazing. I mean, the story itself was so amazing and the sex was good. xD I loved it. I ussually don't comment but I feel as if this story deserved it. It was remarkable. (And to be honest I was looking for sex but i found an amazing plot and good sex) Lol i feel dirty. Anyway, this story was awesome and I am expecting more ;D Please write more!

You sure this is you first time? Doesn't seem like it, keep up the good work :D

CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!

Pretty damn good for your fist piece!

Come on Nat, u know u r good, no need to ask those questions on ur every stories, so now can u be a good samaritan one to post ur next chapters? We r waiting.....

LOVE IT!! Want more please!!!

i really would like to read more of this story so please do continue.

please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please don't leave this story here please continue it I love it.

Really good plot and characters. It is too short but I love it.

what??

dirty pool, you can't just leave it hanging like that! Finish it, please!

This story is definitely worth finishing, so please try!

Add more :)

Finnish this! It's damn good!

Your story got really interesting and you haven't finished it, since you last posted almost a year ago. Please don't be like other people who have posted and never finished their stories....even after being begged. I am waiting on edge to see what happens next with Ayasha/Beast/Myani....I figured Myani would try to come after Ayasha after she escaped and maybe a confrontation between the Beast/Myani. Thank you for the great first 5 chapters!!!

This story rocks! BUT you need to finish it! I love this story and I like the way you are going with it but it's left hanging and that absolutely sucks. Sooooooo for goodness sakes FINISH IT ALREADY!!!!! Please?????

keep it up i love it! please continue!

That would be too cruel.

i really like your story you havent added more in a while but i hope youll continue leaving it like this is such a tease ps as an idea he could have a healing salve in his saliva see where that takes you

are you gonna continue? pleeeeeease you cant leave it like this

My gosh what a story. Poor A, she never catches a break,the poor darling. This is so darkly exciting. I'm lovin it! Please continnue this story, I can't wait to see what happens next!

-Sarai

Please, please, please carry on. Loved it so you can't just leave it

More dangit! Do cliff hangers only when needed! Like every 6 chapters but more please!!

Nooooooooooo! i wanna know what happens next! Please, please, please! Continue!

More please!!

Will you ever finish this? last time you updated was in 09. I have a sick feeling you wont. DAMN YOU.

dont leaves hanging

Ok,don't stop the story! I really love the story and the beast was good! Next give some detail about the beast, like who what is he alone or what! So don't make us wait too long.

You can't stop this story here...you just can't! Please do another chapter!

So it was ok to rape her because she's...pretty? Right.

I can not stand cliff hangers that never get resolved. As for the rape it seems like it would come with the territory of an occuping force. Also being a beast isolated from polite society (not that her planet has that) it may not register with him that what he was doing was not ok especially once she started enjoying it.

Keep going. Don't stop now!

I like that the beast has thoughts. Makes it quite interesting.

Loved it. Exciting and erotic, wonderful combination.

I hope you are not stopping here would love to read more

I am not too happy that you ended your story this way :0! What happens next? Please say it's on the lines of the beast defeats this guys, he explains a bit of who he is to get, takes her to his palace, they get to know each other a little, fall in love, and breaks the spell....

To short but shit happens

No,No, you need to finish this I would love to read more.

Where'd ya go? Would love for you to keep going with this!

Cliffies don't actually serve a purpose if you don't continue with the next chapter. Please finish this story, it started out so good.