by annaswirls
I loved this poem, its unique and honest subject matter and the way it was written. Kudo.
For me it's a special skill to interweave dialogue into a poem. I really enjoyed its tempo from start to finish.
I hope I'm correct in the irony of the title, suggesting she's really an old sourpuss. If I'm wrong, please don't correct me. The image I have of her is just too much fun when compared to you and your son.
.......did my previous comment go? I found this late and it wowed me. Who ever or what ever is removing comments - STOPPIT please.