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All Comments on 'I Still Wonder'

by openeyeddream

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
your first? story

you need some serious editing and this could have been a better story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Editing

I am surprised how this story made it thru. It has potential but really needs a lot of editing.

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