All Comments on 'Things in the Distance.'

Sweet! Liked it muchly.

Ah yes the might have beens but will never be again no matter however much you might wish it. Thanks for a great read

This is a very personal work, or so it feels to me. I liked the images and in one spot, the hall, I felt as if I were there.

Line 9, I believe you might want to reconsider "touch" and replaced it with touched.and the ellipses at the end could be replaced by a period to make it more concrete. The way it is leaves it open for debate.

I read you yesterday, I believe and enjoyed. Hope to see more from you in the future.

~NJ

Always those memories. Often for me not so good, the losing you note. I agree with 'touched', but I like the trailing off of the ellipsis. 'the they' in the fourth line of the last stanza seems awkward - why not drop 'the' ?

Thanks.

Good stuff -- evocative...

Good stuff -- evocative...