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DianthusDianthusalmost 15 years ago
Grin

I love your sense of humour! What a good story.

Austin8Austin8almost 15 years ago
"They're real"

Real good story bud... good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
enjoyable and inventive

I really liked your story! Great idea. Good luck in the contest.

DesertPirateDesertPiratealmost 15 years ago
Very Well Done!

Nice touch old boy!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101almost 15 years ago
A Fun Story

This was a fun story - a bit hard to believe, but this is fantasy, after all. Good luck in the contest.

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Loved It!

A funny and amusing story. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Inventive

A good twist to the old locker room fantasy. Nudity doesn't actually feature though. I enjoyed the story though.

DG HearDG Hearalmost 15 years ago
Cute story

Of course it wasn't believeable but was funny. I enjoyed it; it put a smile on my face. Good luck in the contest.

With respect

DG Hear

bruce22bruce22almost 15 years ago
Light, fantastic fun

Nicely executed and amusing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great humor

It had good sexual content, but the humor was the best part. Not the humdrum "in and out" or the "I made something that made me master of the world", but more like "wow, that's not exactly what I expected." Can you keep some more with this same kind of twist going?

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