by TE999
I really liked your story! Great idea. Good luck in the contest.
This was a fun story - a bit hard to believe, but this is fantasy, after all. Good luck in the contest.
A good twist to the old locker room fantasy. Nudity doesn't actually feature though. I enjoyed the story though.
Of course it wasn't believeable but was funny. I enjoyed it; it put a smile on my face. Good luck in the contest.
With respect
DG Hear
It had good sexual content, but the humor was the best part. Not the humdrum "in and out" or the "I made something that made me master of the world", but more like "wow, that's not exactly what I expected." Can you keep some more with this same kind of twist going?