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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Oh dear

While the content of your story promises to be quite erotic, your execution leaves a lot to be desired. Plus, your modesty is a huge turn-off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Sambo

I think you just fucked mancelt, even so you still got no talent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
sam SUCKS

SUCK sam SUCK

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Can there be anything worse

You would have to try really hard to write something worse than this... even writing gibberish would be better than this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hmmm....

Wow! You have a gigantic ego and your story wasn't very interesting or erotic. Not enough detail about the other participants, it was all about you. Apparently it was a lot of fun, not so much for your readers.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...

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