by shandal
I am enjoying the story and the slow build. Very nice for a change. Really. Add to that: I love you for the perfect description of how to put on cologne. Really, that's the way it is supposed to be done ladies. Don't marinate in it.
I enjoyed reading your story so far very much and look forward to learning more! :)
I especially like your slow build up, there should be more modern fairy tales like this for adults. Thank you for sharing and please keep up the good work!
I'm reading your wonderful story and I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. The man seems too good to be true. Your story is so well written and plotted so well, I can't seem to stop reading it.
Why do you do one page chapters? Why not have more pages in a chapter?