All Comments on 'Summer's Surrender'

yay! im first. love it!

What a wonderful story. Good God I needed that !I've had the shittest couple of weeks ever. Anyone have a ciggy ? I hope there's more or at least another story. Thank you !!!

(wiping the sweat off my brow) Well, that was one hot, steamy story. Are we going to be seeing more of these two? I think you fogged up my computer.

Great story, I think I may need a glass of water or a shower to cool down! I hope you continue to write about these two because they are steamy together and their back story seems interestng. I want to know why she hates him. But wonderful start, bravo!!!!

Great development of the character relationship in such a short piece, I loved the way the characters came out. It's a great short read, I just wish we had more emotional investment in their relationship before the story ended. But, great piece overall!

That was amazing I hope there is more with summer and matt, I would really like to know how their arrangement started...

More please!

More please!

Damn that was hot, hope there is more of summer and matt!!

those comments all by yourself ? the plot is complete rubbish, the writing is good, so would be the erotic scene in other circumstances. and this has nothing to do with light domination. for nothing in the world I fuck a guy I hate.

I had to get me a cold drink after that..Good God that shit was hot!

Its burning up over here I think I may wake up the hubby for a little treat ;)

I definitely wasn't expecting that. That was hot as hell. I'm really turned on right now. Can you please continue so we can see some character developmemt? I want to see more of these two.

Please give us more. And to the ahole that left the nasty comment just dont read it is ok.

I can't wait to read more. Summer and Matt were amazing. Please update.

Enough said by the lot: this story is HOTT! Please tell me you've got more of Matt and Summer (but especially Matt) up your sleeve. -J.

Great story so far, I can't wait to see if you add more; however, I think we can all do w/o the racist talk from one of the previous comments. Everybody has animalistic instincts and just because someone is African American doesn't mean they are more animalistic than anyone else. I thought people on this site were supposed to be adults and well, comments like the one I'm referring to area very juvenile.

another fantastic inter racial love/lust story to enjoy!!! but really really want to know their back story. PLEASE PLEASE continue. Hope to read more from u soon.

...it would be nice if you would continue this story...and give a background on the terms of their business....ne hooo...that is all....oh yea....THIS WAS OF THE WALL!!! OMG!!!....carry on.

Great to see a change in the typical story outline. I'm very curious to see how she ended up in this situation to begin with. Well done, keep writing!

Loved how you approached this. Straight to the sex, but not just a stroke story, gettting an idea of what was between the characters without slowing down for exposition. Great hot sex, too. Great job.

I want to know more about why he is forcing her to have sex with him? Thanks

one of the hottest stories I've read on this site.

Awesome! More! Give us more Summer & Matt. She was hot, he was hawt, They are fiyah! You are awesome. This is the best story I've read in ages. It had it all intrigue, anticipation, mystery, sex appeal and it left you wanting more. So kudos to you. Keep it up.

I can't wait to find out the background for their relationship. The opening chapter was HOT.

That was hot! Impressive writing skills. I especially like that despite not knowing their backstory I was still able to enjoy this. Hope you'll be writing more for us soon!

I can't wait to read more. I'm interested in more background as well

Very well done.

Damn!!!

Now that was HOT

Automatic favorite story. That was tooo good. Damn

HOTTTTTTTT!!!

That was verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice.

Very well written! I LOVED it from the first paragraph down to the last. I want MORE!!! :-)

"He stuck a finger in her dripping whole, stroked her gently and pulled it out and walked towards the en-suite bathroom."

"Dripping whole"? Perhaps spell check?

If only I could vote for this over and over again! 5 super stars EVERY time!

I see you can say something positive about a story. Good for you. And I agree about this one, but I hope you will take some advice and ignore the stories with themes you don't like. You come off much better being positive.

This was an awesome read. another hot, sexy,exciting, and interesting story. I like the characters. Thank you for not sexually degrading this bw/wm story, even though there was slight reluctance, you did a good job of not dumbing down Summer. all in all I gave you 5 stars and I enjoyed reading the entire series.

This person is banned from Literotica for cyber stalking and abusive language. This person has serious mental health issue. His previous moniker is fitandtrim, beware of this person.

This is the first of your stories I've stumbled across curiousmuse, but it certainly won't be the last. It was very erotic and even without backstory, the emotional heft was enough to keep me reading. 5 stars.

As for cantbuymy's disbelief of someone being banned on a porno site...why not? If the person in question was making attacks on an author's character or slandering them, then I could see it. Just because we're reading stories about a variety of sexual practices (some not so nice), doesn't mean we've thrown out the concept of behaving like civilized human beings. As an example of a parallel to this ban, consider this: I'm a firearms enthusiast and an occasional hunter, but, if on a site devoted to firearms, someone were to log on and discuss poaching or murder, no matter knowledgeable they might be about the gun trade, they would be banned. There are limits even here. Enjoying pornography and erotica doesn't suddenly devolve people into mindless savages without any morals or ethics whatsoever. We still maintain at least a modicum of civilized restraint and respect. Most of us anyway.

Very hot and oh so good!!!!

This was so hot. I loved everything about it!

I had a guy like this - he was black. We were work acquaintances of sorts. We were friendly enemies I guess. I wouldn't date him or go for drinks. But he'd have me on a string some nights - I just couldn't say no. My body needed it so badly - and he seemed to know. I'd beg for it. Its not that he was black - although it might have been a little. But he always made me beg for it.

Your stories are left us wanting more please finish

So hot - wow!! Would kill for a part 2.

OMG THERE IS A PART 2 & 3!!

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Good beginning!

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What a way to appeal to the senses with such a serotonin boost then the sudden sugar level crash that only an unfinished story can give.

Just more racist trash. Stupid and ugly.