All Comments on 'Looking At The Neighbor Lady'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A Vision in the Woods

Good description of two people unknowingly sharing a voyeuristic experience.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Really nicely written -

It did take a couple of switch overs to get what you were doing - so labeling the sections to warn the reader would avoid that hick-up but it did not interfere with the enjoyment.

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