All Comments on 'Fucking My Hot Ex Girlfriend'

Reads like some teenage boy put his wet dream on paper. What a waste of time.

You ever taken any English lessons?

You any idea of grammar, spelling and sentence construction?

Get some help before you try any more writing!

... heard of 'speech', or 'quotation', marks?

They indicate what is supposed to be being said, as opposed to what is either descriptive or narrative.

Until you get that sorted out you really shouldn't bother to waste any more electrons on pretending to write!

Could have been a good story if there was some background. How did they get reacquainted? Why did she decide to come to see him? Are either of them married or in a relationship? Too many missing pieces from the plot for it to be a good story. Could have been a four or five, but as written, the story is merely another "hot girl gets fucked by somebody" story that gets a 3 - or a 2 if graded on grammar and punctuation.