by no1fanboy
what kind of anger fueled racist shit is this? trying to find any excuse to use a racial word against black people is pathetic and sad. this is with out a doubt the worst story i have ever read. get help now. your a pathetic person.
Whenyou switch from third person to first person back to third, back to first, it disrupts the flow.
I'd like it noted that at least there's no rape in this story. Plus it's obviously satire... Sheesh.
I never imagined that a story on this site would make Sanuel X's bullshit look like Hemingway. You've proved me wrong, sir.