All Comments on 'Teen Neighbour Get a Photoshoot'

by DavidMcenroe

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very hot !

Good start - could be the beginning of a very hot story. Please continue !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Terrible Dialogue!

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Some of the worst, most unrealistic dialogue ever! Sorry, but people, (real, human, non-cybog people), just don't talk like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Sex luvr

The story was ok. I'm a regular reader and the story could use some more intensity and lust. Other stories I have read were better. This one coule use a little more sex in it hope you have a sequal with more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good

like the plot. keep going that way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
WOW- CRAP

Do people say wow all the time where you from?

evilspikeevilspikeover 13 years ago

You should spend more time on the modeling. This was simply too fast. It needs more of a buildup.

ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago
Love thy neighbour...

And if you can't love them, at least get into their panties.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
not bad...

... but it could be better. And WHAT part of the male anatomy is the 'prostrate?'

I believe you mean the 'prostate.' Well intentioned, but fell well short of the mark.

Anny nonomous.

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