All Comments on 'Hopeless Situation Ch. 02'

AN EXCELLENT SECOND PART OF THIS STORY HOPELESS SITUATION.

THIS IS BUILDING INTO A VERY HOT EROTIC STORY.

very much. Man that was one sweet forced orgasm, the second one I mean, the first was fine im sure but im having trouble remembering it after having listened to the second. Reading by use of a loudspeaking program, I get the impression you are going a bit too heavy on the descriptive words --forgive me, I forget what they are called... I also get an impression you tend to use the '-ing' tenses at places where '-ed' tenses would be more appropriate --again forgive me, I forget the proper terms... Technicalities aside, (and seriously, let's put them aside I'm not pro enough for this,) loving the storyline so far.

HOT, must read more.thanks.gem

"what kind of a man are you that you have to tie up a woman and rape her to get your rocks off?"

Easy answer... "Loser."

"For the first time in a long while he felt happy and complete, and this small scared woman sleeping in complete exhaustion next to him was the source of his contentment."

Exactly.