All Comments on 'Decisions in Paradise'

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Jack_RussellJack_Russellover 14 years ago
Great start!

This should get more interesting... please tell me there are sequels in the works.

mBrowmBrowover 14 years ago
Hot, Yeah!

Well done! Please send us more!

EastTennesseeEastTennesseeover 14 years ago
An AMAZING Work!

The most compelling aspect of any story here on Literotica--at least for me--is the believability factor, which this story possesses in great abundance. As a fellow contributor, I want to thank you for taking the time necessary to compose such a highly detailed work. I salute your efforts!

Reindeer58Reindeer58over 14 years ago
Wonderful

Great character definition, good prologue, very nice finish. How long was the vacation? You really know what you're doing. I have a few chapters of my own to finish then I'll collect and read the rest of your submissions. If you get a chance read a few of my later chapters of "Any Chance" and give me feedback on my female/female interactions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent

Fantastic pace. Not too fast. One of the better mother/daughter stories.

wrighterwrighteralmost 11 years ago
wow

one could actually feel love in this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Why did the story end so abruptly..... God it was smoking HOT!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 5 years ago

Very sexy! Loved it. On to chapter two!!

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
very hot and sexy

well written, great tease, just extremely erotic start to finish. well done

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