All Comments on 'Kirsten Ch. 03'

The story is rushed and bad

I agree that this story was rushed. There is so much that leaves the reader asking "But...[insert question here]". This story has the potential to be a great novel if you made it longer.

This was a good story but I would have really loved it if it had been slower with more detail and more added to the story not just meet, have sex, become a vampire