All Comments on '4th of July'

by C2RJ

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don87654don87654over 14 years ago
Any date, any marriage

This story need to be relocated to the Sunday Church bulletin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Just a question

You refer to Jeff as "tin Man"...why ? It might have been interesting to know.

Crazzie1Crazzie1almost 14 years ago
The best one I have read so far.

This story is very captivating and fun to read. The whole thing is cute, sexy, and erotic all in one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
lame

very lame story. don't quit your day job (if you have one).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
sorry to say but....

Boorrrriiiinnggg!!!! I agree totally with the 'lame' comment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
more sex less mumbo jumbo

I didnt even get wet while reading this pile of junk.

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