All Comments on 'Taking the Risk Ch. 20'

by shandal

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marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Great Chapter!!!!

That was a great chapter that you wrote today. I like how you developing the characters of Misha and Francesca and showing the vulnerability of both of them over the past couple chapters. I like how she finally is moving in with him. I like how he seems so vulnerable to her at times. I can hardly wait to see which do with the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautiful

This was a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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