All Comments on 'Blown By The Beat'

WOW!! What A story I hope you continue with Alison losing her virginity to this guy also at the club.I'll be looking for it.

hot! Sizzling in fact! The fact that you made Allison sweat and bookish as well as being a virgin made it all the more cool when she got horney and gave her very first blow job! Brilliant! Cant wait to see him return the favor!

A great story about a girl warming to the important task of sucking men off.

It took me a long time after being married to be taught how to give a proper blow job AND learn to LOVE it. Now, when out dancing, I will look for a man with above average endowment to excite and take outside for a blow job. Once that is accomplished, I will return to the club to have my

husband dance with me and take me home for a good hot fucking. We make love the next morning.

wish i was the stranger in the club.

Great pacing to a terrific buildup. It's extra exciting to read a story that doesn't neglect the building of sexual arousal and how enjoyable it is to experience the growing wetness in women and pre-cum with men. Thanks very much. Keep writing.

mr_neb@hotmail.com

I was engrossed from start to finish. That was such a well written and wickedly sexy short story.

...you just write that way.. ;-)

Thank you again!

Cheers

Chance