All Comments on 'Uma's Baby Ch. 01'

by Tom Mandy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Uma can have MY Baby! Rawr.

Good grammar. Well told. I just felt that the spelling errors where U were trying 2 say 'Fuck' were egregious. Other-wise a decent tale, Tom. I'm off 2 read Ur sequels 2 it, now (& I HOPE U've figured out how 2 spell the eff word in them). ta

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