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Why Some Poems Don't Make It!

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by normal jean07/08/09

ohhhh, my, a murderess!!

and I would venture to say that any serious poet has done his or her share of the killing. Again, you have posted a poem that I truly enjoyed. Loved the point of view. My favorite way of "disposal" is drowning, as I love water and adore a river.

I especially enjoyed the way you compare your new poems as spoiled brats, that is totally cute and so easy to relate to. I have brats, but they are hidden away under different alts ;)

please keep writing because this fan looks forward to each new posting of your work.

~ NJ

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by EroticOrogeny07/09/09

Mine just sort of wither up

and the pencil dust blows away.
(That also can happen to ones I start, but don't come back to).
Do like the children simile.
One thing came to mind while reading your poem is Ciardi's 'A poem should not mean, but be', something I try to keep in mind.

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by UnderYourSpell07/10/09

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A very clever idea once my poems are out there they can go and make their own living there's no coming home again

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