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ohhhh, my, a murderess!!
and I would venture to say that any serious poet has done his or her share of the killing. Again, you have posted a poem that I truly enjoyed. Loved the point of view. My favorite way of "disposal" is drowning, as I love water and adore a river.
I especially enjoyed the way you compare your new poems as spoiled brats, that is totally cute and so easy to relate to. I have brats, but they are hidden away under different alts ;)
please keep writing because this fan looks forward to each new posting of your work.
~ NJ
Mine just sort of wither up
and the pencil dust blows away.
(That also can happen to ones I start, but don't come back to).
Do like the children simile.
One thing came to mind while reading your poem is Ciardi's 'A poem should not mean, but be', something I try to keep in mind.
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A very clever idea once my poems are out there they can go and make their own living there's no coming home again
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