All Comments on 'Victoriaslice Gets Dirty at the Spa'

Well Vic, I thought you would have written something with a story to it, but instead wrote a few lines of sex and poorly at that.

I've read worse - much worse - on this site! Its just sex and I like that!

You need to have some plot, some character development. And it's hard to get into a story that has two typos in the first two paragraphs - "rubbing my up my legs" and "he had been rubbing my back"

GOOD START TO THIS FIRST STORY. COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER. NOW FOR THE NEXT PART.

Several people are complaining about no plot or character development. Vic says in the profile that such things are of no concern, that the only goal is a sexy, sexy story and I think that's usually accomplished. People who are more interested in character develoment should go to the library and read books that have less X's in their rating. Why waste time writing complaints? Find a writer you like and write as much encouragement as you can. You can't remake a writer into something you want; you can't make a sow's ear out of a silk purse.

ive read a lot of works on this sight but yours was more than worthy of my 5 Five stars