30 Days or Bust: Day 04

Turning into something more

This is turning into something more than what I thought, a romance. And I pleased to say it increases the appeal. Well Done.

Truly Erotic Literature

Since he is falling in love with her, the act of stimulating her while she drives herself to orgasm, and he fantsizes about the most intimate of ways to make love to her body, all combines to produce a gem of eroticism.

sensational

A page turner well written could not put it down

I was shocked when I read the part of Mr. Mark offering the option of Masterbating, and I can just tell the final blow will be epic..hopefully I'm right :}