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by PhaonsBrother07/12/09

thanks for your comments

I really liked your poem, I thought it was about lovers and not so much a plover, but the last line threw me off. I read the poem as a woman who's afraid and excited by the desire of her man. I'm probably going to keep thinking about it, so good poem...could you tell me what it's really about?

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