by NonStopFunGuy
Just wow. You are so amazingly talented.
Just one tiny thing and I know I am being picky but it's "bawl" and not "ball" when she starts to cry.
didn't this used to be one long story, not a four parter?
thats a sad ending i really wanted to hear the details on how u 2 fucked
"The father was holding the camera in most of the pictures, pointed at his dick fucking his daughter's cock, mouth or ass..."
That was fucking lame ass, how many damn chapters of this shit do ai have to read before the bitch gets laid? Why didn't the little twat ask him why it was ok to fuck gervfriend but not her? I quit, argh, just one long fucking boring cocktease story. :(
The waiting is killing me, and it's great!
It makes the characters more real, the events more intense - and when she gets him - or maybe not, maybe the guy on the phone by proxy - she'll by hot as a rocket!