All Comments on 'Reunited Twins'

Fantastic beginning. Please continue with this story as this is a great start. I loved reading this story & I hope to read more of it soon.

Please continue

The second part is coming soon. I am about halfway through writing now. After that it shoud take about three days for literotica to upload the new story. can't reveal any details

I think I need this explained to me. What is it with the blood, I don't understand that part. I don't think vampires do it that way. Although I do like the way the vampires are in the "Underworld" movies.

Two bedrooms, one bathroom - a small mansion? Where are you from, Munchkin-Land?

Poorly written, idiotic dialog, the pace was just blaah, find a grown-up to edit this for you, please, and re-submit it so it scans properly, it's too jerky to be worth the read