All Comments on 'Robinson Family Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Outstanding.

Great start, loved it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you write it soon.

kevswickkevswickalmost 15 years ago
Heating up!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
If Only

I wish that was my family. Great start, Please continue

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
If Only

I wish that was my family. Great start, Please continue

golfadikt2golfadikt2almost 15 years ago
Didn't feel like a complete chapter...

Great start for a story... nice build up.

Now for the bad news... I don't think it felt like a complete chapter. I would have preferred you to write the next part and post it with this part to assist me in reading a complete story. This made me feel like I read a much-hyped tv show only to discover that the first episode only had the build up with no climax or plot.

I'm anxious to read the next part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Too short

I agree with golf.

FirebatFirebatalmost 11 years ago
Haha

This is entertaining. :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I had been looking to rereading this story it took a long time to find it again

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