by siblingspank
Great start, loved it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you write it soon.
Great start for a story... nice build up.
Now for the bad news... I don't think it felt like a complete chapter. I would have preferred you to write the next part and post it with this part to assist me in reading a complete story. This made me feel like I read a much-hyped tv show only to discover that the first episode only had the build up with no climax or plot.
I'm anxious to read the next part
I had been looking to rereading this story it took a long time to find it again