All Comments on 'Payback'

time to give it up.

Obviously not to be taken too seriously!! In that case, I loved it.

But I am sure we are going to get someone from the anti-wimp squad indicting the two husbands for not kicking the cheating whores to the curb. In fact, I can not say that I would trust the gals and certainly not the guys. At this point a well-known critic would point out that no women can be trusted. But then do you trust yourself?

<p>But I just didn't like the premise of this story</p>

<p>I mean lets see, the story has three guys who have their wives (and one girlfriend) on their case because of strippers at a stag party.</p>

<p>So the men have the bright idea of getting even by taping the women when they know no one knows they are doing it</p>

<p>The husband of Sue says <i><b>I don't want them fucked, but beyond that I don't care.</b></i> yet none of the three care that their wives and girl friends were giving out blowjobs to completion to men they just met? Really? How enlightened of them.</p>

<p>And the only thing they are focusing on is that now they are getting lots of guilt sex after catching their wives cheating on them? Really?</p>

<p>And one guy still marries his girlfriend/slut after he see's her stick her tongue up the butt of a strange man? Really? Long as she does it to him too it's ok? Really?</p>

<p>Sorry but there is something wrong with the mental state of the characters of this story. Maybe this was more of a stroke story</p>

<p>I found it humorous that one guy says something about STD then takes his wife to bed right after. You can get all of the big four STD's orally as well as through the sex organs. Ewwww.</p>

-Risq

fucks arent worth it the risk is to high. Good clean divorce is the answer. Along with films sent to every living relative, coworker, and friend.

is "wives".

This was fun to read. An editor would be helpful. It was "Sharron" at the beginning of the story and "Shannon" in the middle and the end of the story, not to mention the first to third person changes and the like. This is not Shakespeare but still . . . As-to the story, I feel there was some originality in this version of the payback theme. The holier-than-thou attitude of the wives was clearly just that, and a little film and some money spread around was all that it took to prove it. Of course, were Sue less hung-over, she could have defended herself by saying she was paying her hubby back for feeling up the woman at the stag party -- it's a bit like the other stories where the women go over the top in their revenge activities -- "Hildy" being a prime example. Certainly the vomiting at the end becomes quite the turn off -- let's face it, puking is not very sexy. Anyway, it was a nice variation on the genre. Thanks for writing.

Those guys give the rest of us a bad name. Hope their wives find out and tear them a new one. Not bad enough they go over the line with strippers. They have to help their wives go over the line as well...

How could a married guy not think that was funny, there must be some gay guys commenting on this.

What a good story with sex and fun. I love the no drama storyline. Write more like this. Good luck.

LMAO, paybacks are a bitch! So sweet to see the shoe on the other foot.

for the moment the wives realize that they were set up. Jim told his wife there were only three copies,

How long before the wives talk about it, and realize the only way he could know that, is if he had made the video.

Payback could be sweet; how about another chapter.

I would have told her that I would keep the tape. If I ever suspected her being unfaithful again, I would use it in their divorce. He let her off far too easy.

What kind of husband will allow/encourage this kind of behavior on the part of his wife?

Gave it a one. I hope I'm just in a bad series of Slirpuff's stuff. I'm keeping on going through the list but getting discouraged.

No human has a 10 inch cock, let alone 12" and any story with such stupid garbage deserves no better than 2**s. Any writer with an IQ of 100 or more would Google 'penis size' before writing such nonsense and making himself appear retarded .

i wish you wouldn't keep drifting to writing in the third person from the one who was talking/ thinking.

That said, i enjoy all Slirpuff stories and always look forward to more!

NKen

I thought it was funny. I don't know what girls night the wives attended but it sure isn't anything like what me & friends attend, there are male dancers but you can't blow them on stage & we really wouldn't want to. I don't understand why the wives were so angry over their husbands stag party--I could understand them being pissed off with the guys sucking some nasty strippers tits but what they did was 100 times worst-- my husband goes to strip clubs, shit sometimes I go with him, he won't touch the strippers I have to take his hands & make him rub their ass & tits. Lol... It's so funny, he acts like he's scared to get a little grabby with me there, I personally don't mind--it's not as if he's going to leave me for them so who cares. I usually get a lap dance & believe me when I say I'm not shy about grabbing some ass & feeling up some silicone boobies. I think my hubby is afraid I'll divorce him or some bullshit but I constantly reassure him that as long as he keeps his hands out of their pussy I'm good. One stripper had her ass in my hubbies face upside down, I almost chocked on my beer seeing the look of total fear on his face. So I've stop torturing the poor guy & just let him go with his friends. I personally think its a nice/new experience that every married couple should enjoy, it's something you can do together. My husband & I go to the strip club all the time, he now understands its ok to feel up the strippers & I have a little bi-side to me which he's known since we met. I think the wives overreacted a bit --not about the titty sucking but about everything else. I think the husbands little plan was funny.

I enjoyed the story, but is there place for blackmail

In a relationship. I don't like control freaks.

So perhaps my comments are harsh.

You have to be fucking kidding! He gets some tit and is happy that wife sucks off a 12 inch strange black cock and eats cum on a stage so now they are even? No woman does that in front of hundreds and claims it was the first time. And no fucking way to take any sex from her for 6 months, if ever, that is how long it takes to find out if she has aids.

Jesus H. Roosevelt Fucking Christ!!! Are all you idiots so self absorbed and serious that you can't recognize that? This piece was not meant to be anything more than lighthearted entertainment. Stop your criticism, get a fucking life and lighten up. Great job, Slirpuff. Ignore the assholes.

Mat1014

Hahahahaha. To make it even worse, he used it TWICE!

its catching up and catching. TK U MLJ LV NV

A quick, quirky little ditty.

It deserved much less, but I gave it a one.

This is hillarious and more believable than you think. My wife attended a private bachelorette party about 5 yrs after we were married.. I asked her all about it, because she gave me shit about strip clubs. I was young and only went a few times, but I didn't lie. Two of the three strippers at the bachelorette party were pretty good friends of mine, and she didn't know, until about two years later when we saw them at a local bar. It is a good thing SHE didn't lie, because I had already got the whole rundown. You should have seen the look on her face. PRICELESS! My wife and my buddies told me the bride was trying to get one last fling in, but this IS a small town, so no-go.

Women get MUCH wilder at strip clubs than men.

That also explains why they get so upset at men for going to strip clubs, they think men act the way women do.

it doesn't get better when more do it.

You will find several from 10 to 14 inches.

I thought EVERYONE knew of Holmes.

Wathing my wife suck off some strippers cock and having him cum on her slutty face would end the marriage for me. But guess what, you and Jim were the fucking pimps. Your buddy went ahead and married the other whore? You are all deserving of one another. Look,, I understand you were trying to be funny. For me, it didn't work.

That this was the first time? Seems highly unlikely. He really should get an STD test. So should she. And then decide if it's forgiveness or divorce time.

Even with drinks and encouragement, these girls got up with very little encouragement and didn't hesitate to blow the dancers.

I'm not suggesting that they went this far all the time but I'll bet they had some private moments to remember. Actually cheat...maybe and then...maybe coming soon until now...oops!

To me - they were either having the occasional and discreet encounter and/or were certainly willing to under the right circumstances.

Women ARE worse than men and much more quick to indulge in fantasy and/or forbidden adultery!

Having worked as nightclub security in a past life, I can definitely say that men can be real idiots and crude assholes, but on male dancer night, women become fucking animals. Some of the worst are the middle aged and older "ladies", executive suit and all.

Well written as usual, but I didn't liked it...2*

a bit odd, setting your wife up to suck another man's cock. And that's revenge?

And here my first thought was clubbing baby seals. Silly me.

And for all the analmousies and the rest of the BTB trolls? If it wasn't for Southern Comfort and how easy it is to get women drunk and stupid, none of you would have ever been born. Just saying.

Did anybody ever tell you, you're an idiot? No. Well now you've been told.

A Slirpuff story with a happy ending.

just to ease ones ego. TK U MLJ LV NV

so... wife sucks other men's cocks and he has to PRETEND to be angry and hurt?

A hot story,well written,but full of low-life characters who all deserve to have extra strength laxative sprinkled on their sandwiches!

Had the feeling that in order to get their wives on tape,those dip shit husbands would have done nothing to stop their wives from playing "Hide the Salami" with the Big dicks!

I think that sums it all. Stupid people doing stupid things and taking it lightly. You writing skills and especilly your strylines had hit a new low with this story. Sooo many things were left or treated lightly. So she cheats and he is happy because he got a BJ? Are you crazy?

The total of my comment says it all

If this is the crap you are going to be putting out...just stop.

Sanctimonious cunts!

Two hubbies now have regularly well-used chubbies!

The 3rd? Why would anyone want to marry a twat who'd let a 12 inch black dick explode all over her after she sucked it off?!

Good stuff! - A 5+

Who's to say they didn't. The guys had left with the tape after the BJ's. Who knows what happened after the break?

Where's the benefit to doing that? Letting some guy soil her mouth with his semen? He clearly doesn't care about his wife. He should cherish her - and every orifice she has. What a loser!

Don't take it too seriously guys, it was a tongue in cheek humor piece. I think.

I believe this is the best of the “Payback” stories I’ve read yet. And yeah, as the previous commenter said, it’s humor, don’t get too wound up over it. On top of that, it’s Fiction. It’s just a figment of Slirpuff’s warped, but humorous, imagination.

It’s a tale I enjoyed very much in particular because it was so plausible and realistic that I could see it happening in reality. I would encourage Slirpuff to write a sequel where the girls go too.far and the sparks fly!

Story.

Are sick in the head, morally ethically and mentally. You all make me sick .

Anonymous 01/08/20 is an asshole! There is nothing wrong filming what their wives did stage. No one forced their wives to go up on stage and blow the strippers. They did it because they wanted to do it at the time. This bullshit about being drunk at the time doesn’t change the fact that they did it! Just because you are drunk, doesn’t change your thinking process, it just changes your attitude towards doing things. Like what my husband doesn’t about won’t hurt him! The anonymous is pissed off because “her” husband caught “her” cheating on film!

If sucking tits is equal to sucking a BIG BLACK Dick then the math is WRONG!!!

I would never take her back...

Fucking hilarious!

I certainly would not have been happy finding out my wife gave another bloke a bj, let alone a bj in front of hundreds of witnesses, some of whom had to have known the girls. I’m afraid that would have been the end of my marriage not an opportune to get a bj off the wife. This was far beneath Slirpoff usual standards. ⭐️⭐️

“Sharron” ... “Shannon” ... “Sharron” ... “Shannon” ... Jesus.

One star, and for lotsa reasons.

A classic!

Great fucking story. I loved it.

What sneaky bastards, can say I blame them. Thanks for your writing.

A well spun tale. These stag night stories don't usually work out so well.

Not my cup of tea. But many commenters seem to miss the point: the husband's paid to have the drinks spiked and feet their wives hammered and then paid the MC and the dancers to get them to give them blowjobs. Shannon was a bonus. No way that marriage goes through with Rick, once he sees what Shannon did going all out. Sue tried but ended up puking when the black guy rammed his cock in to hard and deep. At the mythical 12 inches, what do you expect (mythical.becauze less than 1 in a few million odds). The premise is Jim and the main character wanted it to get out of the doghouse and get leverage on their wives to have what they wanted sexually. Nice. /sarcasm off. Creative idea but gross. Not much love in that marriage.

Meh Femdom agitprop.

Why those sneaky bastards,… The wives talk about sex and eventually the “tape” gets mentioned and they figure out they were setup, which in chapter 2 they plot a little revenge of their own. And so it goes….

That made no sense to me. But to each their own.

Right up until the last sentence. And HB, you need a new catchphrase,

The setting up their wives for the blowjobs with the strippers while drunk was execrable. What a mess. And Sue really overreacted to his groping. Yes it is bad. And deserves some punishment. But seriously? It was a stag party with alcohol. Now of course, any such empathy for the husband goes out the window when they paid the strippers to mouth f$ck their wives. Gross.