by MrJack
Wonderful story, I loved reading it. Please continue writing this type of story & maybe even a second part to this one.
...when Grammy finds out? As she must. Does this reawaken her lust?
Nice Fucked Up stories are the reason we come to LIT for entertainment.
Nice Fucked Up stories are the reason we come to LIT for entertainment.
I am not into two women doing it. But I do love the twist at the end of the story. I did add You to my Favorites. I have not read one of your stories that i do not love. Keep up the Great work.
The sexual tension is their, unfortunately their are too many exclamation points and things are over exaggerated, people just don't act like that, even the incestuous ones.
Otherwise, it was enjoyable.
My girl-friend and I read this story together and it wasn't too long before she had her hand in my jeans, doing the most wonderful things to my prick while my hand was inside her navy blue school knickers (yes, she is a schoolgirl but nearly nineteen!!!) fingering her hot wet pussy.
The descriptions of what this man did to his grand-daughter were absolutely fantastic.
Keep up the good work!!!!!!
Thin, white-cotton panties stretched tightly over her shapely ass. The panties fit so tightly that the entire crack of her ass made a deep crease down its length. Her sleeveless, pink camisole top was pulled up enough to show a wide expanse of the soft, summer-tanned skin of her back.
You use the above in other stories, I'm no critic, but change it up some please!
Other than That good story
LOVED THIS STORY, MUCH MORE OF THIS AMAZING THREESOME PLEASE. PERHAPS ALSO DO A LOOK BACK WHERE IT WAS BETHANY'S MOM AND SHE IS REMEMBERING THE FIRST TIME SHE KNEW SHE WANTED HER DAD TO FUCK HER, AND HOW IT LED TO HER GETTING PREGNANT. ALSO PLEASE LET BETHANY BEG HER GRANDDAD/DAD TO GET HER PREGNANT TOO.
oh yes, pappy, you old devil, i loved all that sucking and licking ... i love old men and young girls it's so sexy ... i want their hungry moutns on my fat nipples suckling my milk and on my pussy, sucking my clit and licking my pussy lips oh yes, i'm hungry for the male mouth and the male cock pumping that seed into me ... oh and it's so much better when men pump it in young girls who so need to be fucked and filled to grow babies and produce milk so that other men can suckle
A description of Heaven for pappy...
But the virginal girl's language betrayed her knowledge so I couldn't rate this higher than a 2 star.