All Comments on 'Rebuilding Harry Ch. 03'

Very interested to see how this plays out....somewhere in the back of my mind, i cant escape this feeling that V. has been "sent" by Trish....but that's just me.

v the star in this story and the man a chum.when a woman have to be the approval for a man to feel good about himself he sucks.

Oh boy...this is getting interesting on multiple fronts. Harry and Reg...Harry and Veronica...Harry and Trish!! Oh yeah...Harry and his company. Love it. This is a very well written and compelling story. Certainly not a stroke tale but sexy enough. Can't wait for the next installment.

but not really understandable. why is he not doing anything at all concerning his wife? of course he has a working problem and just starts sort of an affair and that even before he has solved the problem at home but how can he function normally and just accepting the fact she is cheating , which hurts him and the just doing the same? really strange. smells like a setup

Why he did not do the things that reader believes anyone would do?? Should he trust Veronica especially since she did not tell him what was going on? Should he put a different spin on the collection problem? Is Trish having another affair? Lots of fun...

I am still not clear where you explained why the young man is still with Trish? After a year? They clearly have no relationship. To me that is a big writing hole that you have not filled. He clearly hurts, but that would be reason to have left her after confronting her. I do not mind the mystery of Veronica, because this story is from his point of view and that makes sense. But not explaining his reason for staying does not make sense in the plotting of the story, a wrting fault. At least justify it a little, you are the author. Have you given any reason why Reg would hate him? Is he Trish's new F-buddy? Let's face it, her sudden interest in his work activities is a little suspicious. Ah, well? I hope the next chapter is tomorrow.

I like this storyline but..

Technically the writing isn't perfect. I don't require perfect adherence to "The Elements of Style" but I don't like having to guess where paragraphs begin and end, either.

Second, this is going slow. Almost too slow. I get that you want to build the story up but this is a loving wives tale and the first time you see his wife actually speak in dialogue is in chapter 3?

If this doesn't start moving in chapter 4 I am going to have to hang this one up.

I like the characters even though the back stabbing boss is somewhat of a cliche.

Along with other commentators I have been assuming that we are in the reconstruction of Harry phase... But the author could want to run a Job on him. He could be homeless and in the gutter before starting the upward curve!

Riviting, I Love this story. So much thought is in this. Very enjoyable. Please continue.

A lot of what's going on is confusing to me, but I'm trying to find out if Veronica is setting him up or actually helping him. At one point I thought that his wife is conspiring with Reg,his boss, to make him look bad but there isn't any reason for that. So I'm still confused.Not a very exciting chapter as the other chapters were....Rich

but you can't screw it a sauna it will kill you, I tried and had to stop, little thing but still stupid. T

With this chapter things are hotting up and getting interesting all around. 5*s.

Reg is stealing from the company and he’s trying to blame our hero.

This is going to be good

4/5