All Comments on 'The Poem Catcher'

by Sapphos Sister

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EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
another poet poem

I like your butterfly metaphor - think it works really well. And the final line applies nicely to the finished poem.

vrosej10vrosej10almost 15 years ago
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I like your butterfly/muse metaphor too. Great stuff. I just spent today chasing my own butterfly!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 15 years ago
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A very clever idea can't say I like the thought of pinning a butterfly though! I've got to keep telling myself it's only a metaphor!

rubyslipperrubyslipperalmost 15 years ago
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What an apt description of the labour of taming wild words...great metaphor.

PhaonsBrotherPhaonsBrotherover 14 years ago
You are a poem

I'm gonna try and catch you and write you down.

peachesmelbapeachesmelbaover 14 years ago
Absolutely my friend

somewhere in the clutter and the clatter of the bills and the soccer games, traffic jams and grocery lists....oops there she goes again...must run :-D ali

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