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Nate2301over 14 years agoGood Start
Nice set up for what should be a good series. Please, keep writing.
Doctor_Teaseover 14 years agoWhat, no Piper-on-Sara action?
Hoping the girls get a little more involved with each other in the next chapter!
ohnudeoneover 14 years agoNice start.
Fun start. Look forward to seeing the next instalment of this tale.
Anonymousover 12 years agoFind an editor
It could be a hot story but your phrasology and grammer are REALLY bad.
Anonymousover 12 years agoSee in the dark?
I liked the story although it moved a bit fast.
One question though, "How could Sara abd piper see anything in a tent, in the dark in a campground? If they used a light in the tent, anyone outside would know what was going on."
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