All Comments on 'Overcome With Lust'

That is an excellant story . Good story line and made me feel I was watching them in motion, really good work!!

This story is excellent! Nothing like hot sex with a stranger in a public place!

Damn I love the strangers meet and screw line keep it up.

Great story! I came so hard reading it! That is one of my fantasies... to have spontaneous, not thinking-about-it sex!! WOW

Maybe you could write a continuation for this.

I wish I was caught like that. I would like this strange man to slide his fingers into my wet pussy, to kiss my mouth deeply, and to suck my breasts. Thanks for the pleasure.

One of the best ones I've ever read. My dick got so hard, I thought it was going to explode!

The writing is very good, but the story was a bit boring from a female's perspective.

This girl has a tongue piercing, a hot body, and young, with plenty available guys.

This kind of experienced girl is now more demanding on a guy and knows what she wants, regardless of how hot he is. Too many hot guys don't have a clue how to give a female an orgasm. A female knows if he doesn't know to lick her pussy and get her into an extremely "hot" state, he likely won't be worth the effort, and she won't suck his dick first. She knows better. She will go for the guy who can give her what she wants, hot or not. All females are aware of the guys who expect to get their cocks sucked, fuck, one little lick on the clit, then leave her to masturbate.

Guys who are good looking with big cocks rely too much on this and "think" they know everything they need to know. These guys are lucky if they get it once, because they usually don't get it a second time from a girl who knows what she wants. The female clit is first and foremost. 90% of females can not orgasm from their vaginas.

It was obvious this was a guy's story. Learn about the modern female and make it more realistic from a female's point of view. Yes, females have lied to males for years to keep from hurting fragile egos. Females, like males, need their most erotic sex organ licked and licked the correct way to bring the most eroticy. Until we write it correctly, males will continue to be misinformed about what females really want. The guys who get it right will get the girls and KEEP the girls.

Please take this in a constructive way as that is the way this is intended. You're a great writer. Your writing style is not my complaint.

Love her inability to stop herself from being fucked by this sexy stranger.

There is something so hot about how the guy just continues on about his business while she dithers in indecision...

Love your stories...thank you!

Love her inability to stop herself from being fucked by this sexy stranger.

There is something so hot about how the guy just continues on about his business while she dithers in indecision...

Love your stories...thank you!

While this story is very well-written, it is much too brief in every way. The introduction to the characters is too brief, as is the background information to the story. The love scene is also much too brief. According, sequels are certainly warranted for what could be a very interesting longer story, should the author decide to continue it.