All Comments on 'Jessie's Adventures Ch. 00'

As a male I found your story to be believable and the flow was just right. The story could almost meet the criteria of a bdsm as the seduction was in the mind before the actual act. Hope that you continue writing and expanding the story.

Referring to the comment of the person before me: As a female, kissing and licking on someone's ass in a public place doesn't sound believable or plausible to me.

start out wonderfully. Verrrry sexy, with the tension of crossing lines, and realization of one's desires. I hope you will some day come back and write subsequent chapters. Having said that, please feel welcome to just write more. You have talent for these stories, and I would enjoy reading more from you.

So where is Chapters 2, 3, 4, 5, etc.....this could be the best of the lot!

I want this to happen to me!

damm, such a great opening